My
11th
secret is fairly simple: write everything down. By everything I mean
everything. I learned
this from having a memory that's scattered at the best of times. I'll
assure myself that something useful or vitally important will remain
securely bolted into my creative memory, but before I started using
this trick I lost a lot of good material. If you're accustomed to
writing longhand and find that your ideas flow more freely with a pen
on a physical page, make sure there's a substantial margin for side
scribbles. If, like me, you're much more adept at typing, keep a
second word processor window open. Even on the first hasty scribble,
there are sentences and ideas that end up on the proverbial cutting
room floor. My suggestion is to keep the scraps. Ideas or passages
that are discarded during your rough draft or the first stages of
revision might turn out to be pure gold later on or work much more
effectively in a different context than the one for which you
originally conceived them. Obviously this can result in a jumbled
mess, but just like the actual piece you're writing it can be pared
down as you go along. This can also apply the organization and
planning stage; try taking a collage approach to your outline. Keep
the pieces that have potential but alter the structure. In my
experience making heavy use of the cut, copy, and paste functions universal to even the most basic word processors has been extremely helpful.
Verb/subject
agreement
This
example was taken from an online discussion that was part of one of
my other classes in which the offending classmate was referring to
the recent shift in the U.S. Army's recruiting strategies.
“.
. . their business goals was to recruit people. . .” and later in
the same post, “They gave you the basic rundown of what you was
enlisting into. . .” In the first case there's a superfluous “s”
and in the second an erroneous conjugation.
Confusing
plurals and possessives
Taken
from another part of that same discussion:
“.
. . create content of interest to WSU demographic's.”
This
particular grammatical faux pas is one of my greater pet peeves and
is disturbingly pervasive. Plurals do not need apostrophes.
Confusing
“who” and “whom”
This
was taken from a similar discussion but a different class:
“...one
cannot fully understand who to vote for...”
In
this case “whom” would be more appropriate (on a side note, she
also ended the phrase with a preposition).
I love your secret of writing everything down! I have a scattered brain most of the time too. I need to keep a notebook in my car and by my bedside so I can write all of my good thoughts down. I always seem to forget them by the time I actually need them.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a neat article! An Advanced Literature teacher I had last semester suggested something very similar. She said that we should keep a "dead darlings" file on our computer. This "dead darlings" folder is where we should keep all of our discarded paragraphs, sentences, word scraps, or anything that didn't make it into the current draft. Thank you for sharing such a great secret!
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